Dax Rigby, War
Correspondent
by
John B. Rosenman
MuseItUp Publishing
Buy links:
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A young hero.
A beautiful, sexually aggressive woman.
A mysterious, dangerous world 900 light-years from Earth.
Put the three together, and I
believe you have the formula for an exciting and romantic science-fiction adventure
novel. In Dax Rigby, War Correspondent, Dax Rigby travels to Arcadia, a
distant world to investigate the war between two alien species, the Hoppers and
the Flyers while World War III rages back on Earth. Dax, who is only twenty-three, hopes that his
news report will enable him to escape a life of poverty and marry Lexis, his
rich boss’s beautiful daughter, when he returns.
The ingredients of my tale serve
many functions. Perhaps the most
important is to test Dax’s strength of character and ability to survive the
dangers and solve the mysteries of an alien environment. In particular:
·
Can Dax solve the mystery of why the Hoppers and
Flyers fight each other so savagely and why both species are dying?
·
Can Dax avoid being killed when he does battle with
a giant Hopper on the plains of Arcadia?
·
Can Dax solve the mystery of what’s killing the
inhabitants of Base Camp and jeopardizing the mission there of the Western
Alliance? Why, in short, does everyone
act so sick and behave so strangely?
·
Discovering what appears to be an enemy
conspiracy, can Dax determine the identity of its leader and avoid being killed
to stop his investigation?
As
if that’s not enough, Dax faces other challenges:
·
Can Dax remain faithful to Lexis 900 light-years
away on Earth when he is faced by Casey Frank, a beautiful, demanding copter
pilot who keeps trying to seduce him?
·
Can Dax cope with the shocking revelation of his
divine identity and powers and remain true to his mission?
·
And most of all, can Dax find a way to use what
he learns not only to save the lives of two alien species but also the lives of
six billion people back on Earth? In
other words, can he stop World War III and save his side, which is losing?
Choices: ultimately they
determine who and what we are. Will Dax
remain strong and focused despite the multiple problems he faces, or will he
crumble as most of us would? Though
tough and hardened by a brutal childhood, Dax possesses a core of
idealism. Will that idealism ultimately
prove to be a strength or a weakness?
Will it destroy him and doom humanity or save him and Earth as well?
Why did I write the novel this
way? Someone once said that if you want
to grab your readers and keep ’em hanging on every word, you should throw a lot
of problems at your hero, especially BIG, seemingly INSURMOUNTABLE
problems. Hey, it’s worked for day-time
drama for over fifty years. In addition,
as a kid, I watched fifties movies like Forbidden
Planet, which features a distant planet that serves as a treasure-trove of possibilities. So I love world-building and feel free to let
my imagination soar and take chances.
I’ve followed this approach in other novels as well, such as Speaker of the Shakk (Mundania Press)
and Alien Dreams and A Senseless Act of Beauty (Crossroad
Press). In all these, the hero visits an
alien world and has amazing, even cosmic adventures.
Excerpt: After
their sabotaged copter crashes, Dax faces a gigantic Hopper with a puny mallet
in order to save his and Casey’s lives.
The monsters were all around him. Looking up at them, he felt he
stood at the bottom of a dark well about to collapse on top of him.
Dax took a
cautious half step and glanced around.
The copter’s nose had gouged a deep groove in the dirt, and its rear
section tilted upward even more steeply than he’d thought. On the copter’s
other side, giant Flyers flapped crimson wings and stared at him with bulging
green eyes. It was the Hoppers, though, that riveted his attention.
Close by, one of them started toward him on armored hind legs. The
six-legged creature must be at least four meters tall.
Dax raised his mallet in trembling fingers and gazed up at the behemoth.
It watched him with hungry, multi-prismed eyes. Ice froze his spine.
The Hopper opened
its huge maw and puffed out a breath. It reeked of carrion. Dax
staggered back against the copter. Holy shit, he
thought. Look at the size of its mouth! It could eat me in a single bite.
4 comments:
I like your ideas on how to keep people reading! Excellent post!...not to mention those excerpts!
It certainly sounds like a page-turner! Best of luck with it, John!
If it lives up to that cover, John, you got a winner. And it certainly sounds like it does!
This sounds seriously intriguing!
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