Sunday, March 6, 2011
Six Sentence Sunday
From my recently released book, Stranger on the Shore available at MuseItUp Pulishing http://tinyurl.com/4zbzgtk
He stopped, pulled away, looked at her, his eyes questioning. “We have to talk, Jordan.”
She turned away, ignoring him. He turned her to face him.
“What’s there to say?” Candlelight flickered in his eyes.
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Oh, don't you hate those "we have to talk" moments!
I feel something tense about to happen behind those short sentences.
Got this from your publisher- loved it- will be reviewing soon ♥
"We have to talk" is never good, but this is a great six!
A great six-sentence that leaves you wanting much more :-)
Not a fan of those 'we have to talk' moments. Love to know what he's going to say.
~Sarah
Thank you all, hard to say what he's going to say, but you can find out from the book. Thanks, Dawne. I look forward to your review.
oh no, not we have to talk!
Great little snippet!
I do like the little hook in your six sentences, Roseanne.
(Sorry I forgot you were doing this. It is a great idea isn't it?)
I'm thinking this is going to lead to something good!
The tension is great
and she said ?
Tell us more!
I bet there is lots to say!
Sounds like they don't need words. :)
Dang! Yes, no...yes!
Oh dear! Sounds so ominous!
What is there to say about what? Is she breaking up with him?
Nice imagery! Love the candlelight in his eyes.
The candlelight flickering in his eyes is such a pretty touch.
I sure don't like those, "We need to talk," moments. Congrats on your book.
Cheryl
Grrrr. I wanna know what happens! :D
Love those "I have to talk...." sentences. They can go either way. Can't wait to read your book.
I'd like to be a bug on the wall :)
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