Sunday, March 6, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

From my recently released book, Stranger on the Shore available at MuseItUp Pulishing http://tinyurl.com/4zbzgtk
He stopped, pulled away, looked at her, his eyes questioning. “We have to talk, Jordan.” She turned away, ignoring him. He turned her to face him. “What’s there to say?” Candlelight flickered in his eyes.

25 comments:

Marie Dees said...

Oh, don't you hate those "we have to talk" moments!

Marsha A. Moore said...

I feel something tense about to happen behind those short sentences.

Dawne Prochilo said...

Got this from your publisher- loved it- will be reviewing soon ♥

Lisa Fox said...

"We have to talk" is never good, but this is a great six!

SherryGLoag said...

A great six-sentence that leaves you wanting much more :-)

Sarah Grimm said...

Not a fan of those 'we have to talk' moments. Love to know what he's going to say.

~Sarah

Roseanne Dowell said...

Thank you all, hard to say what he's going to say, but you can find out from the book. Thanks, Dawne. I look forward to your review.

Sandra Sookoo said...

oh no, not we have to talk!

Patricia Preston said...

Great little snippet!

Kaye Manro said...

I do like the little hook in your six sentences, Roseanne.

(Sorry I forgot you were doing this. It is a great idea isn't it?)

Keri Ford said...

I'm thinking this is going to lead to something good!

Jayel Kaye said...

The tension is great

sassyspeaks said...

and she said ?

Chrystalla Thoma said...

Tell us more!

Rebecca Royce said...

I bet there is lots to say!

Cate Masters said...

Sounds like they don't need words. :)

Christine London said...

Dang! Yes, no...yes!

Lauri J Owen said...

Oh dear! Sounds so ominous!

Casi said...

What is there to say about what? Is she breaking up with him?

Marie Dees said...

Nice imagery! Love the candlelight in his eyes.

Taryn Kincaid said...

The candlelight flickering in his eyes is such a pretty touch.

Cheryl said...

I sure don't like those, "We need to talk," moments. Congrats on your book.

Cheryl

lexcade said...

Grrrr. I wanna know what happens! :D

lionmother said...

Love those "I have to talk...." sentences. They can go either way. Can't wait to read your book.

Alanna Coca said...

I'd like to be a bug on the wall :)