Six Sentence Sunday
Hi Everyone,
Here it is Sunday again. Boy the week passes quickly. This week I've chosen another six lines from my book, Stranger on the Shore, which will be released March 1st at MuseItUp Publishing at: http://bit.ly/dM2bHA
Jordan winced as lightning flashed again, back-lighting the dark clouds. Darn it, she wanted to be inside cuddling by the fire not out here in a storm. For two cents, she’d turn around and go back. But something drew her forward.
A man’s body against the rocks.
Oh, Lord, please don’t let him be dead.
12 comments:
Very good six, Roseanne! Pulls you into the story right away, makes you want to read more.
Powerful six, Roseanne!
Very suspenseful. Great hook.
Yes, please don't let him be dead. I could feel the tension!
I have a feeling he won't be dead, also he might be kind of handsome.
Morgan Mandel
http://morganmandel.blogspot.com
I could feel her concern drawing me in. Great tension!
Wow, I'm totally hooked!
Nothing quite like a body in a storm to hook a reader right off the bat. Great six.
Eep! Problem!
Thanks for your comments. This was a fun story to write.
Ooo, that's tense!
Great six!
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