Sunday, January 30, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Hi Everyone,
Here it is Sunday again. Boy the week passes quickly.  This week I've chosen another six lines from my book, Stranger on the Shore, which will be released March 1st at MuseItUp Publishing at: http://bit.ly/dM2bHA


Jordan winced as lightning flashed again, back-lighting the dark clouds. Darn it, she wanted to be inside cuddling by the fire not out here in a storm. For two cents, she’d turn around and go back. But something drew her forward.
A man’s body against the rocks.
Oh, Lord, please don’t let him be dead.

12 comments:

Kaye Manro said...

Very good six, Roseanne! Pulls you into the story right away, makes you want to read more.

Sarah Grimm said...

Powerful six, Roseanne!

Taryn Kincaid said...

Very suspenseful. Great hook.

Rebecca Royce said...

Yes, please don't let him be dead. I could feel the tension!

Morgan Mandel said...

I have a feeling he won't be dead, also he might be kind of handsome.

Morgan Mandel
http://morganmandel.blogspot.com

Marsha A. Moore said...

I could feel her concern drawing me in. Great tension!

Lisa Fox said...

Wow, I'm totally hooked!

Trish said...

Nothing quite like a body in a storm to hook a reader right off the bat. Great six.

Dee Carney said...

Eep! Problem!

Roseanne Dowell said...

Thanks for your comments. This was a fun story to write.

Pippa Jay said...

Ooo, that's tense!

Laurel Kriegler said...

Great six!