From my soon to be released Double the Trouble -
Two men, one with twin daughters, and two murders complicate life for Kate Wesley. When the twin sister of one of the murder victims shows up, well let's just say life gets very interesting.
“Would it hurt you so very much to say my name?”
“Huh?” God, she was acting like an idiot. Couldn’t she think of something better to
say than huh?
“My name is Mark. Are you afraid to say it or something, Kate?”
She swore he purposely drew her name out as much as you could a short name.
I posted a tribute to my mother at http://museituppublishing.blogspot.com/2011/05/things-my-mother-never-taught-me.html?spref=fb I hope you enjoy it.
11 comments:
Great six. Love the short name comment.
Great snippet!
Enjoyed your six!
Ah, so more Mmmmaaaaaaaarrrk than Mark. Lots of power in that!
Got a little confused b/c of the intro. Was expecting this to be about the twin sister of the victim. But good six.
Intriguing by-play. I'd like to see where the story goes.
Two men, two murders, and twins. Sounds like there's plenty of opportunity for conflict in your story!
I'd like to see where this story is going. Should be wonderful.
lol at the last line.
This sounds like a really intriguing story.
Cool line about him dragging her short name out. I could hear it in my mind.
premise is cool. Lots of double stuff going on
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