Sunday, May 22, 2011

From my latest release, Double the Trouble - Now available at MuseItUp Publishing  (YAY) http://bit.ly/doublethetrouble

A spark of something familiar tumbled in her stomach.

She pushed his hand away. Try as she might, her anger shattered.
“How dare you walk in here like nothing happened? Like we’re going to pick up where we left off?” Kate spoke through clenched teeth.

15 comments:

Ginger Simpson said...

Great six, Ro. I can't wait to read DTT.

Arlene said...

Alot of tension shown well. DTT is on my must read list, too.

Carolyn Rosewood said...

Lots of tension there!

Kay Dee Royal said...

You chose wisely on the six sentences - great tension and I'm certainly left hanging...on what's up next?

Lisa Fox said...

Someone's in trouble!

Rhobin said...

A tantalizing six sentences, tickles my mind with where it all goes. Great job.

Sandra Sookoo said...

nice six. would like to read more!

Jessica K said...

Wonderfully tense scene.

Viviane Brentanos said...

tense scene. Nice

Sandy Ruth said...

You did a good job of showing her anger - pushed his hand away; clenched teeth. Congratulations on the release of Double the Trouble.
Here's my six: Sandy's Six

Lindsay said...

Fantastic six. Love the force in her words.

vernac said...

I think this guy's about to learn a lesson.

Karen Cioffi said...

Double the Trouble sounds great. Nice cover!

Sarah Grimm said...

Tense six! Someone is definitely in trouble.

Jayel Kaye said...

Nice tension. I think he's in for a surprise