From my latest release, Double the Trouble - Now available at MuseItUp Publishing (YAY) http://bit.ly/doublethetrouble
A spark of something familiar tumbled in her stomach.
She pushed his hand away. Try as she might, her anger shattered.
“How dare you walk in here like nothing happened? Like we’re going to pick up where we left off?” Kate spoke through clenched teeth.
15 comments:
Great six, Ro. I can't wait to read DTT.
Alot of tension shown well. DTT is on my must read list, too.
Lots of tension there!
You chose wisely on the six sentences - great tension and I'm certainly left hanging...on what's up next?
Someone's in trouble!
A tantalizing six sentences, tickles my mind with where it all goes. Great job.
nice six. would like to read more!
Wonderfully tense scene.
tense scene. Nice
You did a good job of showing her anger - pushed his hand away; clenched teeth. Congratulations on the release of Double the Trouble.
Here's my six: Sandy's Six
Fantastic six. Love the force in her words.
I think this guy's about to learn a lesson.
Double the Trouble sounds great. Nice cover!
Tense six! Someone is definitely in trouble.
Nice tension. I think he's in for a surprise
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