“No!” Rebecca sprang up in bed. Hot searing pain bore into her shoulder. What was happening to her? A warm sticky substance flowed from her shoulder. Oh God, there was going to be blood. From the feel of it, lots of blood.
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8 comments:
So what caused the blood? Interesting six sentences.
Joyce
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Intriguing teaser! Makes me want to find out what happened.
Ohh - very intriguingly gruesome.
What happened? Very intriguing six! Great job!
Did I miss something. What caused the bleeding? Great six
Great hook!
Wow! What happened?
Whoa. What happened??
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